And Ed, well, while on one hand this was an extremely unpleasan experience, it's broken the barrier of Al as a completely non-sexual being in his mind... so that's gonna change how he behaves around Al. (I'm sorta seeing them maneuvering around each other in close quarters now... Ed trying to shower and change clothes and things like that.)
I can see that really messing with Al; all of the sudden his brother is trying to hide his body from him. Every time Ed goes into another room to change clothes instead of stripping down in front of Al like he always had, Al is going to know why.
Especially if Al's fixated on him, like you suggested; so he wants everything to be like it used to, but at the same time he wants to see Ed naked, so Ed's not wrong to be acting differently, but every time Ed does, Al remembers the warehouse... and so on circularly.
Which is why you clearly need to write the sequel, so they can get fixed :)
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Date: 2005-06-27 10:20 pm (UTC)I can see that really messing with Al; all of the sudden his brother is trying to hide his body from him. Every time Ed goes into another room to change clothes instead of stripping down in front of Al like he always had, Al is going to know why.
Especially if Al's fixated on him, like you suggested; so he wants everything to be like it used to, but at the same time he wants to see Ed naked, so Ed's not wrong to be acting differently, but every time Ed does, Al remembers the warehouse... and so on circularly.
Which is why you clearly need to write the sequel, so they can get fixed :)
(Yes, I'm a bad elricesty person)