Date: 2005-05-28 02:16 pm (UTC)
herongale: (that's hot)
From: [personal profile] herongale
This story has a polished feel, great pacing, and is a very nice take on the challenge theme. The dialogue is occasionally stilted, and there are some small problems here and there, but with minor editing I think you could post this in primetime.

This gets my second vote. ♥
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