-Very- nicely done. Even if it is disproved later, it certainly kicks a lot of ass right -now-.
Ed's internal conflict, the fact that he actually has to -sit- on Heiderich to get him to stay put, and -this- line just made the fic for me: "Heiderich was a damn fool. Ed knew the flavor."
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Date: 2005-07-12 05:59 pm (UTC)Ed's internal conflict, the fact that he actually has to -sit- on Heiderich to get him to stay put, and -this- line just made the fic for me: "Heiderich was a damn fool. Ed knew the flavor."
Excellent stuff. ^__^