A few drabbles.

[mikkeneko]

Title: Burn
Spoilers: Episode 22
Word count: 100


If he ever doubted how weak he was, he knows it now; less than a pawn, no more than a bargaining chip, bartered by the homunculus in exchange for his brother's soul. Everything is crashing down around them, and he can do no more than lie here and watch his brother burn.

And she appears.

He can't see much of her, arms up to shield her face against the light, coat whipping wildly behind her from the force of the gale, as she walks into the fire, and folds his brother in her arms.

It's enough. It smothers the flame.




Inspired by a certain doujin that shall remain nameless.

Title: Erotic Art
Pairing: Al/Ed
Warning: possible squick, sex humor.
Word count: 100


"Niisan," Al said with trepidation. "Are you, uh, really sure about this?"

"Course I am," Ed said, dusting his hands as the light of reaction faded. He was already breathing rapidly, either from lust or anticipation wasn't clear.

Al couldn't help but stare down at his own newly transmuted crotch. "Niisan," he said again, "I know you like to transmute really elaborate stuff, but I really think a plain one would work better."

"What's wrong with it?" Ed said with a note of injured pride.

"I... ah..." Al sighed. "Fine. But we're using PLENTY of lube. Those spikes look painful."

Comments

[kytyngurl2.livejournal.com]

ROSS!!!!!! YES!

And nice use of imagery soon.

Second fic.....

Ow. Owoow...Bwahahha!!

Ed, you are such a show-off dork. I think you are going to regret that later. :D

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I think he's going to regret it sooner. *snickers*

[devils-devotion.livejournal.com]

Ah, I loved that episode 22 drabble. That was one of my favorite scenes from the entire series. *_* I had a friend who saw that scene in an AMV - before seeing the show, mind you - and for the longest time he thought it was Roy. *facepalm* But yeah, much love to you for that. No one does anything with Ross's character, and it's a damned shame.

As for the second one - holybajeezusshitgod. I'd ask just WHAT doujin you were referencing, but I don't think my brain'd be able to take it.

(Ed IS really concise about detail, isn't he? ^^;;)

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I'm still always bitter that everyone loves to write about minor characters like Greed and Kimbley, but nobody writes about Ross.

Bwehehe. Let's just say that this particular doujin is out and about fma_yaoi recently. >.>

[devils-devotion.livejournal.com]

Well, it's because Ross is a girl and thus not, you know, potentially male-slashly eyecandy like Greed and Kimberly. (Theoretically. I'd probably do Ross over any of them, and I'm perfectly straight. But that's just me.) Now I want Broche!fiction, too. Curse you. It doesn't exist, so I'll probably have to write it myself. >.<

Oh, I think I've seen it, then. Didn't download it, but I did see it.

[inthetatras]

yeah, the second one is theo ne you'll likely be getting the most comments on, but heck.

*keels over with laughter* looooooooooove it....

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Actually, it seems to be mostly even -- comments on both. ^_^

[tir-synni.livejournal.com]

*dances* Not nearly enough people touch on that part of the series. And the last line of the second drabble. . . . *laughs*

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

*twirls* Well, in a way I can sort of understand. I wanted to drabble that part but I couldn't think what I could do that would add to it. It's just so perfect as it is.

[feast.livejournal.com]

Agree with Devil's Devotion for the first one. Ross usually gets no love, but you had superb imagery and good emotion in that one. Also liked how you did it from Al's POV.

XD "Those spikes look painful". Priceless. Just priceless, Mikke. <3

[youkofujima.livejournal.com]

Maria Ross is LOVE.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

She is. Her and Armstrong both. Not that I'm advocating this as an OTP or anything. XD

[asidian.livejournal.com]

I believe I already told you how -cool- the first one is.... just very poignant and sharp and reflective.

And the second... ohhh, gods, the second. He -does- like to embellish a bit too much, doesn't he? XD

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

*snickers* I think Ed has a not-so-deeply-buried masochist streak in there.