More genderswitch -- Unbinding

[mikkeneko]

Title: Unbinding (will tap dance for better title)
Pairing: Roy+Al, RoyxEd
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Genderswitch! This may bother some people.
Author's notes: Well, I recently got married to my dearest livewife, cryogenia. :D I probably never would have written it on my own, but as a wedding gift, here it is!
Direct and derivative sequel to Loop and Loop, now continuing at a cryogenia near you!


( "Al should worry more about hims... about herself. A little tension isn't going to kill me, she knows that." )

Comments

[sharibet.livejournal.com]

I can't believe I'm the first person to comment, but I've been enjoying the Loop & Loop series, and this is a fun addition.

Poor Ed, so very tightly wound. :-)

[velvet-mace.livejournal.com]

Ed always does just leap into things doesn't he... she...

I can't help but worry that Al will feel just a bit jilted, even though her dates were mostly sham. Her sister just waltzed in and seduced her boyfriend out from under her. Al flirted all over the place, and played the girl, and all Ed had to be was Ed to get into Roy's pants.

[okaasan59.livejournal.com]

"Why don't you just alchemize them off?" he asked. Not that he encouraged it, but he'd seen Edward do it before.

At first I thought he wanted Ed to alchemize the breasts off. O.O

Then I got to wondering...where would they go? Additions to almost any other part of the body would spoil any attempt to appear male.

*snort* Roy is such a rooster.

[sky-dark.livejournal.com]

*falls at your feet, forever your willing slave*

[materia-indigo.livejournal.com]

Yikes, that was hot! Made my afternoon. Thank you!

[cryogenia.livejournal.com]

*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*

I LOVE MY LIVEWIFE <33333 ^_^ Poor Ed. The more stressed he is, the hotter porn with him in it becomes >_>

[jenioctavia.livejournal.com]

Goodlord, Cryo, don't say things like that! You might come up with WORSE situations for him. XD
Though this seems to be pretty damn bad on the 'what's the worst that could happen' scale...
I hope you guys do more of this. I'm really liking it so far!

[jade-pen.livejournal.com]

Ooh, you finally got married, huh? *laughs* Congratulations to the two of you, then... and ugh, even though I normally wouldn't go for Roy/Ed or genderswitch, I still read this one. And despite the fact that it's not my thing... I really did enjoy it. Ed was kept in-character, and I did like how you handled the changes.

But can I force myself to read more, that's the question...

[moumusu.livejournal.com]

Splendid. ♥

[azysapphy.livejournal.com]

mrrr...this made my day. :D

here via sky_dark's recs...

[call-me-bear.livejournal.com]

Wow, I never thought I'd enjoy genderswitch!Ed.
My brain hurts... and I like it! Cool fic.

[hobbit-nudity.livejournal.com]

oh ;_; poor alphonse (and ed too, but she got some, so not as much as alphonse)

i wonder how all three of them will handle the Elrics' 'time of the month', assuming that they will have all their female functions functioning properly...

[m-tonberry.livejournal.com]

*fangirl squeeel*

more please! love frayed-nerved!ambiguous-message!ed x roy. not quite sure what to make of this al, because (i'll like to think) edward's god is al, and al's god is edward... can't see them fighting after they've went through so much with/for each other.

anyway, please write more ^_^

[m-tonberry.livejournal.com]

oh yeah, here via sky_dark's rec

[bamberbabe88.livejournal.com]

Wow! PLEASE! write more. ^_^

[ashacrone.livejournal.com]

^_^ I like this. I hope it continues on. OT3, dude!

BLOWN AWAY

[(Anonymous)]

This fic has blown my mind and i can't think strait I would write song in your honor only I can't write.
So this is going to be Al/Roy/Ed and the elric brothers are now the elric sisters.
And when Roy said " And I understood when you moved in that to have one of you... was to have both. I can accept that if you and Ed are comfortable with it...then so am I." WoW what a guy.
I love Roy, but if that was me and a guy said that after god knows what he just did with my depressed sister laying in his lap I probly would have slapped him.
Hey I not complaining it works out great for the story gotta love Al!
And the sex sceen was bleatifully written.

[orion117.livejournal.com]

I just found this from Skydark's rec, and am I ever glad she linked it. I've read a couple of crack fics about genderswitch, but I think this is the first one that seriously dealt with the emotional impact. Very well done by the both of you. Poor Al - did she have deeper feelings for Roy than she thought?

[midnightbanshee.livejournal.com]

Wow. Just....wow.

[shinigamihollow.livejournal.com]

Want to read but can't! D:

Is that site down/not working anymore? :(
Do you have this fic posted elsewhere perhaps?

Want to read so badly!

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Hey there, this story can be read here: http://scimitarsmile.com/story.php?p=885

[shinigamihollow.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! <3