Practicals (Al/Ed/Hei, smut, humor)

[mikkeneko]

Title: Practicals
Pairing: Al/Ed/Hei
Spoilers: None, really
Category: Porn. Shameless shameless wicked porn. And some humor.
Warnings: Light bondage, abuse of innocent food products.
Author's notes: I... have no justification for this fic, really.


( "Niisan is a very physical learner, you know. Just talking and showing won't help much." )

Comments

[midnightbanshee.livejournal.com]

What I liked about this is how you started off with Al and Hei plotting together (in a logical manner no less!) to teach Ed how to give better blowjobs. The idea itself amuses me to no end. The build up to the sex was good, I like how it wasn't rushed.....although the sex part does seem to be a sudden anti-climax because it ended off so suddenly despite the long buildup. I felt Al and Hei let Ed off too easily.

Love the ending. Enthusiastic Ed is adorable. ♥

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I suppose the fact of the matter is, I'm not all that good at writing detailed sex scenes per se. I'm much more interested in the build up and foreplay,, I guess it showed here.

Enthusiastic? Nay, desperate! :)

[reikah.livejournal.com]

... ♥

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

[fallia.livejournal.com]

The imagery in this had me laughing out loud. I’m in love with the notion of Al and Hei being on the same wavelength and being able to finish each other’s sentences. And Ed tied up in a chair is always fine by me. XD But the thing that finished this off for me was Al’s earnestness throughout: he’s serious and thoughtful and practical despite the nature of their endeavor. The idea of Al standing there and lecturing Ed while Hei demonstrates = priceless.

Thank you for making me sporfle my coffee out of my nose. I like this so much.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I kind of worry about Alphonse in this; how can he be simultaneously filthy-minded enough to think of such a project, and inhumanly cool enough to want to see it through? XD

Sorry about your coffee!

[askerian]

Oh, this is awesome. First, the idea of the threesome fills me with glee. I might need to go and look for it. Second, the construction of the narrative is engaging, and third, well, it's damn funny.

Also kinda hot, but hey. Damn funny hot. ♥

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Hei/Ed/Al is an awesome pairing. Uh. Threesome. :) There really isn't as much as there should be. Kalika Maxwell wrote a really long one, and Nymeria/Kaltia wrote a few... and I think Cryogenia has written or plans to write some... but aside from that, not much. :((

[cofie.livejournal.com]

XD~~~ *happy*

Imagining hei's face at this part: "Actually, I'm game," he said breathlessly is the best xD;;

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Hei is patient, but every man has his limits! :)

[ravenbell.livejournal.com]

Ah, porn. You never need justification for porn. Thanks for brightening up my gloomy election day!

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Well... sometimes porn IS the justification for porn, but thanks. ^_^

[cryogenia.livejournal.com]

YAY! Mischief managed :))

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I solemnly swear I am up to no good!

[tavella.livejournal.com]

Oh, dear. Al really knows how to torture Ed. Academic lectures while he's begging to come. And poor Hei, having to be the practical demonstration.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I admit that I personally can never turn up an opportunity to torture Edward. Maybe Alphonse feels the same. ;)

[cuylerjade.livejournal.com]

yummy. simply yummy.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

thanks! your icon is gorgeous, btw. :)

[velvet-mace.livejournal.com]

I like the way Al nominated himself for the easiest job in this threesome -- the lecture mode.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

I dunno about easy, I mean, he had to stay focused and cool despite what was going on right in front of him. That can't be easy!

[ankoku-tenshi.livejournal.com]

Whee! What fun, teaching sex 'Ed' while have sex. Slightly strange, but at the same time, very characteristic of the Elrics.

[mikkeneko.livejournal.com]

Well, they *do* say that the best way of learning is through experience...